Eating Dirt Poem by Meena Kandasamy

Eating Dirt

Rating: 4.8

her famished tongue feasted on dreams
and she catered to its cravings—
green mangoes clay cloying chalk
citrus soap crusty coal raw rice
crushed ice cubes crayons ash
powdered glass pickled garlic
salt sieved rain-scented soil

a son was born, he was fed
and he learnt to feed
soon he was caught eating mud
a son taking after his mother
a son inheriting her tongue

she tied her speechless moon to a millstone
and after some frantic spanking
she saw in his cloudy mouth
the truth of the three worlds—
sand everywhere, everything
turning to sand.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 08 May 2019

So intense the hatred to unmask the fashion parade of civilization to show its gravity. In truest sense humanity perhaps a global concept to make people specially the solvents to cherish the broadness of mind refusing the reality of thousands and thousands suffered existence burning with fire of thwarted futility. Exposed variations are unique. Thanks for posting.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 May 2019

One of the best poems by Meena Kandasamy....................

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Indira Renganathan 08 May 2019

There's a reference in the last stanza to the incident of Yashodha tying little Krishna to a millstone for eating mud..Krishna was a divine child..so it was possible for Yashodha to see the three worlds in His mouth...but...here whom are you really talking about..I can't get it....of course a thought provoking poem

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Tom Allport 08 May 2019

A powerful write of life's plights?

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Alouwou Mandjah 08 May 2019

Congratulations Meena Kandasamy

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Douglas Scotney 08 May 2019

lovely; but SHE should have been tied too, or instead.

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Bill Cantrell 08 May 2019

A tongue in the third person so speaks as three worlds roll off the cloudy mouth, congratzs for poem of the day

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Prabir Gayen 08 May 2019

Very beautiful poem dear poetess..... Thanks///////

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 May 2019

Wonderful imaginary and imagery.The most impressive lines are....she saw in his cloudy mouth the truth of the three worlds—sand everywhere, everything turning to sand. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the morden poem of the day.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 May 2019

Muse! ! Speechless moon! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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