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Edge of the Water

On the edge of the water
Worrying more than ought to
river reflects back up at me
the water is cool and calm
a peaceful stream
enters my mind
takes over the steering for me
the river floats around a bend
I'm on the mend
with a tree overlooking the river's curve
two birds make a squawk
skim the river's surface together
river boat bells play to set the mood

Submitted: Sunday, May 11, 2008


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  • Jacqueline Millea (11/1/2008 6:04:00 PM)

    Very calming Would like to Thank the poet for this poem

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  • Yuri Duraan (5/11/2008 9:29:00 AM)

    It creates a claming effect... lovely image and well versed. Thanks Yuri*

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