Educational Chasm Poem by Zero empty

Educational Chasm



River of curiosity,
Flowing with the currents of creativity,
Reaches a sudden halt,
With the dams of controlled thought.

Should there be a barrier
Or there be a driving force?
Disciplined like a roman warrior.
Pills of education a sufficient dose.

Making hurdles, further higher,
To maintain a pseudo standard.
Extinguishing internal fire.
Everyone alive, yet dead.

A sense of insecurity instilled.
Only a selected few distilled.
Non linearity must pay the fee.
Minds locked without a key.

Everyone's destination is same,
But same rules, applied for a different game
Can the river reach the sea,
Can the thoughts be nonlinear and free?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Chasms of a rigorous education institution
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 14 August 2013

nice work and well done for the poem you will go ahead

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Divya Gupta 13 August 2013

wow..! ! ! nyc1...you revealed the fact of present education system...keep writing :)

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Payal Parande 13 August 2013

how true todays education system is hogwash. there shouldn't be any barriers for learning, and thats all we see. today a middle class student can't take education due to enormous fee he/she has to pay well it is something to be embarrassed of, . a well pinned piece, great job

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