Egotistical Acrobatics Poem by Michael Fischer

Egotistical Acrobatics

Rating: 5.0


The acrobat walks the tightrope
above those stricken with awe.
So many fear his first attempt,
but he makes it look so simple.

But his act’s not without flaw;
It’s flawed with his flaring ego.
It’s flash without any substance;
It’s only about money and fame.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Hinckley 08 May 2007

Very good, Michael. So much meaning can be gleaned from so few lines.

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Brian Dorn 29 April 2007

Sad but true. It makes no difference whether the 'tightrope' is literal or figurative, most everyone who aspires to perform publicly is driven by these very forces you end with. Good write, Michael. Brian

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Not a member No 4 28 April 2007

Very well written Michael. Can't agree with your judgement because of the particular qualities required to achieve what these guys do, but I have to agree that your poetic skills lack nothing. Fine composition and structure. jim

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Duncan Wyllie 27 April 2007

WOW! how you saw this so clearly from your own perception all so well written, Micheal..you have a lot of tallent Love duncan X

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