Elevenses Poem by Eoghan Finn

Elevenses

Rating: 5.0


Waking from a dopey sleep
Hoping any thoughts I keep
Today are not another's wishes
I pray be unfulfilled-
But my own censure
Of confessions i've spilled

To friends i've culled
In labour, love, on locale-
Our bond's to be annulled
On grounds of rationale.

Oh! The fickle nature of relationships,
The searing need for others.
The ones you toil,
The ones you spoil.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 20 April 2007

Neatly crafted and cleverly written Sue. Love the run-on lines & the nice, tight ending... Rgds, Ivan

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