hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 35,580 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Elimination Of Hatred - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Any music show
May have natural flow
As audience swell
To spread the message

It has power
And strength
To spread its wavelength
Among the people

People know as it airs
With melodious flair
Some sadness
And sometimes with happiness

Music has touch of divinity
With blessings from almighty
It can offer touch of healing
If person hears to it as willing

It strengthens bond amidst hostility
If finds favor among people to have unity
This is secret strength and its utility
Music must be fully used with fine quality

It has message of love and peace
Many parts of world may need it to release
Have songs of humanity, poverty and hunger
You may notice the elimination of hatred and anger


Comments about Elimination Of Hatred by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2013 9:13:00 PM)

    Music has charms to sooth the savage beast

    karl stuber25 minutes ago
    The uneven rhymes don't bother me
    this is a wonderful poem.
    Comment 0
    A Great exposé of the miracles that comes from MUSIC (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2013 9:12:00 PM)

    Roland 'KingShip' Ediare31 minutes ago
    Your work on this poem is intensely emotional, and makes me wonder why every moment of life cannot be lived simple...just like giving in to the music to take charge and control. Thanks for sharing this thought provoking piece. I love it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2013 9:11:00 PM)

    shadows.and.mist
    wow! ! ! this is great! i loved it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2013 9:09:00 PM)

    Well Done

    James Spain38 minutes ago
    A very nice poem with a positive message. Thank you for sharing, I enjoyed your poem.
    Comment 0
    Elimination of Hatred (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2013 9:09:00 PM)

    Kim Duncan36 minutes ago
    An almost song-like poem that speaks of the way music can bring people together, and stop the spread of horrid emotions. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2013 9:08:00 PM)

    Nice work

    LeighAnn Cariker38 minutes ago
    This is not only poetry but it is truth...music crosses barriers and bring people together
    Comment +1
    Good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2013 9:08:00 PM)

    Tara Girard38 minutes ago
    Thank for sharing your poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2013 8:27:00 PM)

    Any music show
    May have natural flow (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 9, 2013


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