Elizabeth's Happiness. Poem by Fay Slimm

Elizabeth's Happiness.

Rating: 5.0


Thomas her lover,
........................ then rallied strong men
Who, warriors bold,
........................ came fierce to the wall
Demanding release
.......................for their Lady, and when
Heard by the felons,
........................ alarmed now, recalled
Their folly, repented,
...........................knowing this princess
Could summon a war,
......................... but instead she chose
To forgive great wrong,
................................ regally addressed
Misdemeanors, wed Thomas,
..................................... sailed to those
Who, long awaited,
........................... welcomed her keenly
Elizabeth. from now,
.............................. realised her dream.

(The End)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 08 September 2009

Its a nice type of writing 10s

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i loved that you said.. the end....... like most fairytales........ i like it much.i like what you are doing with the form.

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Lynda Robson 07 September 2009

A nice ending to your poems on Elizabeth, well composed Fay, 10 Lynda xx

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