Elysium’s Elves Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Elysium’s Elves

Rating: 5.0


a cheerful bride
she is a true pride
like a bedtime story
your love is so fully

until the end of day
your wings always fly
messages of love adrift
is this truly an angel’s gift?

stay with me
O baby, stay with me
thank you, my baby
for loving me

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Catrina Heart)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 23 May 2009

You have always a great imaginative work my friend.....your poems of dedication pours out so fabulously..........Thanks!

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Sonya Florentino 23 May 2009

beautiful dedication to a poet with a heart of gold!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 May 2009

A string of love poems for your beloved baby

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Elysium's Elves, oh' how I can just imagine them and all these love poems are very special I can see Ahmad. 10 Karin Anderson

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Michael Gale 23 June 2009

I really like this one. 'A cheerful bride, filled with pride.' I liked these stanzas. MJG... Of the world, of poetry.

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Lynda Robson 04 June 2009

This poem seems very fitting for Catrina, a wonderful poetess, 10 Lynda xx

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a heartfelt poem..well done

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 31 May 2009

A wonderful dedication to Catrina for all the joy she gives her readers. Well done Ahmad. Elysium's Elves- how lovely...

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Sherif Monem 30 May 2009

Very nice beautiful poem. However, this line is not grammatically coreect: your love is so fully (fully)

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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