(visakhapatnam, india)

What do you think this poem is about?

...embedded in silence

in the incessant flow
of silence that surrounds me
you are embedded
the way a delicate melody is
how long do i wait
for this melody to break free
of the silence to fill
my ears...
the whispers i hear behind
those fluttering eye lashes
burden my delicate heart
with a nagging question
'when... again? '
this endless waiting
this heartfelt longing
spreads into every
nook and corner of my
mind and body like
a forset fire...

05dec2009
13.58hrs

Submitted: Saturday, December 05, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, December 23, 2009


Comments about this poem (...embedded in silence by indira babbellapati )

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  • Rani Turton (12/5/2009 2:56:00 AM)

    These lines are elegant and mysterious. The longing and waiting remain, a question unanswered.

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  • poulas edward (12/5/2009 2:52:00 AM)

    you will hear soon, as yu wish.

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  • poulas edward (12/5/2009 2:51:00 AM)

    you will hear soon, as yu wish.

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  • poulas edward (12/5/2009 2:51:00 AM)

    you will hear soon, as yu wish.

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