Embrace The Grace Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Embrace The Grace

Rating: 4.8


Enjoy a surge of energy
Embrace your feisty spirit
Throw yourself deeply into
Something vigorous, adventurous

A slow-burn approach
Will get you so much further
Try to keep your head
Above the murky waters

Just don’t let someone’s
Negative attitude put you off
Throw yourself totally into
Whatever touches your heart

Your subconscious may be
Trying to tell you something
Take note of those vivid dreams
Just follow your natural interests

Why not satisfy your nostalgia
And start researching the love scene?
With a mood this buoyant, look closely
They will be passionate souls you need

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Luwi Habte)

(inspired by Led Zeppelin’s Song - Kashmir)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 22 November 2008

A slow burn saves a lot

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Ency Bearis 23 November 2008

a great tributary write to Yoonos..with good deliverance..wonderful.. Ency Bearis

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I liked how well you spinned some of the words in this poem. Well Done!

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Airda Jones 24 November 2008

'Throw yourself totally into Whatever touches your heart' That is quite an amazing phrase. Simply wonderful.

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Catrina Heart 31 May 2009

satisfying nostalgia? nice recommendation given..........Lovely poem.........Thanks!

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Luwi Habte 23 May 2009

tis must be your comment, isn`t it? nice writing thanks for sharing and thanks for valuable commets

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 04 December 2008

Thanks for sharing! It is great!

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Brianna Wilshusen 02 December 2008

I like the wording, feisty sprirt brings you in and make one wonder.

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Ravi Sathasivam 29 November 2008

A great write and a wonderful tribute to our dearest friend poet Yoonoos. Very much inspirational. Thanks for sharing with me

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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