Enjoy a surge of energy
Embrace your feisty spirit
Throw yourself deeply into
Something vigorous, adventurous
A slow-burn approach
Will get you so much further
Try to keep your head
Above the murky waters
Just don’t let someone’s
Negative attitude put you off
Throw yourself totally into
Whatever touches your heart
Your subconscious may be
Trying to tell you something
Take note of those vivid dreams
Just follow your natural interests
Why not satisfy your nostalgia
And start researching the love scene?
With a mood this buoyant, look closely
They will be passionate souls you need
(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Luwi Habte)
(inspired by Led Zeppelin’s Song - Kashmir)
a great tributary write to Yoonos..with good deliverance..wonderful.. Ency Bearis
I liked how well you spinned some of the words in this poem. Well Done!
'Throw yourself totally into Whatever touches your heart' That is quite an amazing phrase. Simply wonderful.
satisfying nostalgia? nice recommendation given..........Lovely poem.........Thanks!
tis must be your comment, isn`t it? nice writing thanks for sharing and thanks for valuable commets
I like the wording, feisty sprirt brings you in and make one wonder.
A great write and a wonderful tribute to our dearest friend poet Yoonoos. Very much inspirational. Thanks for sharing with me
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A slow burn saves a lot