Robert Sheridan (9/17/2008 8:08:00 PM)
Bonnie,
The eyes are the window to the soul... you write with such meaningful precision and thought. Lovely, simply lovely!
Robert |
Bob Gibson (9/13/2008 1:56:00 AM)
My wife has those emerald eyes, her beauty she must know! for she cannot disguise!
they light up my life, they melt my heart, .she knows just a glance will tear me apart
in firelight, reflections of a woman in love, in moonlight, her eyes I see heaven above
what grandly aspersions that treat my heart, one day my love our eyes they must part |
Adalynn Cobb (8/10/2008 10:30:00 PM)
Its so beautiful
I dont know what to say |
Ashley Burnam (5/31/2008 12:16:00 AM)
When i read this i think about a oldie rap song Bonnie! Keep up the good work.10 out of 10
Ashley |
Frank James Ryan Jr. (3/11/2008 9:10:00 PM)
Stunning imagework, Bonnie.I like the variable stanzaec structure you employ, in identifying your choice to modify the tone of the poem, and tap a different, yet applicable avenue of the onset storylines tone & course.Very nice work!
~ FjR ~
..2008.. |
Alison Cassidy (3/6/2008 4:18:00 PM)
Bonnie, your first six lines say all you need, strongly and poetically. The rest of the poem is redundant, in my opinion. Passionate writing nonetheless. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ |
Patricia Bankhead (3/3/2008 10:32:00 PM)
Beautifully written and touching...Hugs |
Vidyadhar ... (3/2/2008 9:35:00 AM)
touching poem............. |
Frank Cannon (3/1/2008 8:24:00 PM)
Count me amongst those green with envy..... |
Ken Sebastian (2/29/2008 1:22:00 AM)
this is a true poem on the level of Ashram Ayres or Charles Bukowski.... asks one of those questions that can't really be answered....
lovely
KS |
