Treasure Island

Leslie Ching

(January 8,1995- / Toronto, ON, Canada)

Emotionless


Staring at the wall
Blank
White
Stark
Like my state of mind
Empty
Untouched
Emotionless
Like the face I see
Eyes closed
Skin cold
Heart dead

Submitted: Sunday, September 27, 2009

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  • Haley Akin (8/12/2011 3:34:00 PM)

    With the end of a live, we also sometime lose the ability to feel... Great expression. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (9/27/2009 7:21:00 PM)

    Dear Leslie:
    The time shall one day come
    When out there you will see the opened sky,
    Hypnotized by nature's beauty
    Feeling strong by inhaling fresh air
    Touched by the emotion
    Of fully being alive...
    No more in the shadow
    Or enduring pain at such a young age...
    With the Lord's guidance you'll survive...
    You will soon be in a different stage...
    Without tears but with a big broad smile...
    Hang in there, to travel, ahead you have miles...

    (you got my vote,10+, Love and Peace, Romeo (Report) Reply

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