Tia Maria

Rookie (England)

Emotionless - Poem by Tia Maria

All these words in my head
but like a bowl of beads
without any form of thread
how can I string them together

The sentences just will not form
and subject matter is a jumble
of what to write I am torn
emotions cannot be humble


Comments about Emotionless by Tia Maria

  • Rookie Nalini Hebbar (10/12/2009 10:17:00 AM)

    emotions cannot be humble...wonderful line...i too feel that sometimes...all tied in knots...no flowing thoughts that can translate into words and lines...regards (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lousa Deyzel (9/18/2008 6:34:00 AM)

    I love the peom it is so corect in confusion and saddness.
    It is exacly how i do feel. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kris Smith (8/26/2008 3:59:00 PM)

    Words sleep deep within awaiting the kiss to bring them to life, the twinkling of a family eye, to walk the beach under clear blue sky, to sit and watch the blossom fall, the beautiful sound of the Skylarks call. These are the kisses of awakening.
    Not forgetting friendships hand. Thoughtful write Chris 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Vidyadhara ..... (8/20/2008 12:35:00 PM)

    Yeah I also feel same way
    Sometime it just flows non stop
    sometime words never seem to come
    an excellent write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Tom Balch (8/20/2008 2:40:00 AM)

    This is really a fantastic piece, I love it lots regards Tom (Report) Reply

  • Rookie , aryaindia (8/18/2008 1:53:00 AM)

    Your rush of truth is so amiable. Thanks, arya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Keith Foley (8/16/2008 11:11:00 PM)

    Cute poem, good play on the whole concept of poems. Light hearted but sincere. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tanya Stanford (8/15/2008 7:28:00 AM)

    Lovely analogy. Love the comparison and play on words. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2008



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