Emotionless Poem by Tia Maria

Emotionless

Rating: 5.0


All these words in my head
but like a bowl of beads
without any form of thread
how can I string them together

The sentences just will not form
and subject matter is a jumble
of what to write I am torn
emotions cannot be humble

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 15 August 2008

Lovely analogy. Love the comparison and play on words.

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Keith Foley 16 August 2008

Cute poem, good play on the whole concept of poems. Light hearted but sincere.

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, aryaindia 18 August 2008

Your rush of truth is so amiable. Thanks, arya

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Nalini Hebbar 12 October 2009

emotions cannot be humble...wonderful line...i too feel that sometimes...all tied in knots...no flowing thoughts that can translate into words and lines...regards

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Lousa Deyzel 18 September 2008

I love the peom it is so corect in confusion and saddness. It is exacly how i do feel.

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Kris Smith 26 August 2008

Words sleep deep within awaiting the kiss to bring them to life, the twinkling of a family eye, to walk the beach under clear blue sky, to sit and watch the blossom fall, the beautiful sound of the Skylarks call. These are the kisses of awakening. Not forgetting friendships hand. Thoughtful write Chris 10

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 20 August 2008

Yeah I also feel same way Sometime it just flows non stop sometime words never seem to come an excellent write

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Tom Balch 20 August 2008

This is really a fantastic piece, I love it lots regards Tom

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