Emotions Poem by louis rams

Emotions

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i am feeling empty inside
maybe! it's because the feelings that i hide?
at times it's a feeling of loneliness
and at times, it's loves and desires hidden away.
but with all this i have to say.

i will never change the sensations
of feeling different emotions.
love, joy, sadness, bitterness, sorrow, anxieties, and stress.
but closeness is the one i love the best.

to be close and to be inspired, is my lifelong desire.
to have someone to hug you and to tell
you that everything is going to be alright.
and that someone is there, when you're down and out
that is what emotions is all about.

i found love and it was bursting to be free
a love, so deeply hidden inside of me.
i saw the love in someone elses eyes
feelings and emotions that they could not hide.

i felt their exhileration, and each and every sensation.
i felt the pains that a heart must go through
to bring all feelings closer to you.
the heart and the mind work hand in hand
but it is the soul that makes the plan.

(is it the mind that tells the heart what is love, what is pain.
what is sorrow? or is it the heart that tells the mind these things?)

the soul is the one that instills all these things into us
and this is what we have to trust.

emotions is lifes key
it could make you a slave, or set you free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

lovely write...emotion is life's key and it is soul given..an excellent definition of well..questions and answers..wind up the poem well

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Christine Kerr 13 June 2009

Hey Louis, These types of poems that you write are of interest to me because many personality test I've taken, tell me that I'm more of a Thinker then a Feeler so I'm more Analytical then Emotional. Every little bit helps. Thanks for sharing once again 10++

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Sandra Fowler 13 June 2009

Very vivid feelings expressed here. Those who live passive lives have little to give to others. Kind regards, Sandra

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Kim Yang 01 April 2020

I like these " emotions" .

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dr veenaa rai 05 August 2009

emotions handled with a bit of sense can redeem a man...indeed, , , wellsaid

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i am feeling empty inside maybe! it's because the feelings that i hide? at times it's a feeling of loneliness and at times, it's loves and desires hidden away. but with all this i have to say. ... i have only tosay this..... beautifully woven words with honesty...1o read mine come home...will u marry me?

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Sameer Ahmed 27 June 2009

One who is the master of his or her emotions, can end a sorrow as easily as he or she can invite the pleasures.One should always use them to enjoy them and to dominate them. That is what I believe that feelings are not supposed to be logical and one should not rationalize them for they can hurt you or even bring so much pleasure for you, who know..... they are simply unpredictable...because they are not subject reasons.....they are always subject to actions.....

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Kranthi Pothineni 14 June 2009

Without emotions what is life and living? Nice one.

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