Empty Poem by Wandering Scarlet

Empty

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When i am not distracted by life,
the distractions we know as joy, happiness,
distractions from reality,
distractions, from pain, and emptiness.
Pain,
Emptiness,
when i sit alone, this is what i feel,
pain burning my soul,
emptiness infesting my spirit,
soon i will be nothing,
blank, a slave to anger and hate
soon i will dread all that surrounds me,
i will seek.......revenge......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shelley L Baxter-stanley 26 April 2007

I too know the feelings of empitiness as we all experience it from time to time... Great job, emotion filled and imagery is very good throughout its entirety. Keep up the good work. =Shelley=

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Madly In Love 30 March 2007

I sometimes feel this way thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem

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Anita Blake 29 March 2007

i share the same feelings and i going down the same path. For i to most likely will want revenge. Great poem

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