Mark Normand


Empty


Today just like so many days I waste away to nothing.
Standing here, frozen by fear, I feel I must do something.
The light within has grown so dim; the sunshine of my being.
A cold grey darkness fills my soul; an empty lifeless feeling.
I try to smile and lift my eyes and think a happy thought.
My thinking is dead and I find instead; all happiness is lost.
Where is the life I had as a child the happy free existence?
Gone away, leaving me to face life where hope seems missing.

Submitted: Tuesday, June 26, 2012
Edited: Friday, August 10, 2012

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Comments about this poem (Empty by Mark Normand )

  • Rookie - 427 Points Chris Zachariou (8/10/2014 7:40:00 AM)

    I can feel your loneliness and pain. Your words pierce into my head and sit there making me sad. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,972 Points Hebert Logerie Sr. (8/9/2014 2:50:00 PM)

    A child is always happy, because he or she has not faced life yet. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 299 Points Adeline Foster (8/16/2012 2:06:00 PM)

    Yes, pretty good this. You have done the subject well. Read mine - Nam's Unmorned -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,124 Points Kevin Patrick (8/2/2012 6:39:00 PM)

    This is an excellent example of depression, the feeling of sinken to a bottom that never seems to end, may things improve and thank you for writing this, it captures despair all to well (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shelley Jones (7/31/2012 1:20:00 PM)

    Excellent description of emptiness, it is not a nice feeling. I hope you are that child again running in the sand. (Report) Reply

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