Empty Poem by Heart of Ice Die Die Die

Empty

Rating: 5.0


I feel no pain.
For I am empty inside and there is nothing left.
My pain has hollowed me out
In all it's victorious glory, it has sucked my soul dry.
Leaving only an empty husk of what was.
My pain comes in many forms and none feel remorse
For the pain they have caused me
For none care whether I live or die.
Whether I am whole or empty.
None care and none feel remorse,
I do not even care anymore.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Doha Ewiess 10 September 2009

Were you inside my mind while writing? ? ! ! ...Fantastic work..I like tragedy: D...10+++

0 0 Reply
Broken Heart 23 July 2009

great poem! all ur poems r awesome.... n of my fav type...sad poems...: D sme feeling here! !

0 0 Reply
Patrick A. Martin 23 July 2009

Beautiful Rachelle the great thing about being empty is you get to choose now what to fill yourself with.

0 0 Reply

i really like this poem i have felt like that myself sometimes

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success