Empty/Full Poem by Dave Birss

Empty/Full

Rating: 5.0


empty
‘cos you’re so far away
full
when I hear your voice every day
empty
‘cos you’re not by my side
full
of admiration and pride
empty
in this cavernous bed
full
of fantasies in my head
empty
‘cos I’m here all alone
full
of male testosterone
empty
now and lost at sea
full
of amazement that you’d want me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 28 February 2006

Wow, this is a cool poem, Dave! Seems as if your glass is at least half full! -chuck

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 28 February 2006

'empty/full' is terrific! Sometimes I have empty/empty...full/full moments...then those dry spells that need dusting. I like your poem. L

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Dave Birss

Dave Birss

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