Beach Girl


Empty Heart - Poem by Beach Girl

Powdery, white grains of sand
Softly sifted through my hand.

Flinging sand out towards the sea
Whirling winds blew all away

Raised my eyes out to the blue
Distant whispers closer grew.

Waded out into the waves
Stood trembling and waiting.

Cross miles and miles of endless sea
I thought I heard you call my name.

You strode into my empty heart
Of vacant halls and silent pain.

Your laughter filled up every room
Left smiles in every corner.

With hushed tones and eager love
We bound our hearts together.

One day I hope to touch your face
And look into your eyes

Until that time, I'll only dream
Of emerald isles and you.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Empty Heart by Beach Girl

  • Shahin Latif Shahin Latif (11/29/2015 1:30:00 PM)

    Truly romantic poem. Good ink! I enjoyed it. So, Thanks a lot dearest poet Beach Girl. Be well always. (Report) Reply

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  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (12/12/2014 6:19:00 PM)

    sorry about the smiles. i'll come over tonight and clean those up. bri :)

    p.s. i would be looking in my inbox and at my poem comments, BUT could not access them. but i COULD access my favorite poets, and you are one of them. (Report) Reply

  • Mr. Agape Mr. Agape (3/11/2014 10:08:00 PM)

    As they say on the street:
    Amor de legos es amor de pendejos!

    Love is everywhere, open up and take some! ! ! !

    keeping putting your heart on paper, you do it well! ! ! full of FEEL! (Report) Reply

  • V P Mahur V P Mahur (3/2/2014 2:17:00 PM)

    dear Beach
    this one is a lovely song full of love feelings
    Thanks for a nice musical note
    I invite you to read my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (1/10/2014 12:02:00 AM)

    'You strode into my empty heart
    And found that it was vacant' - So cute! (Report) Reply

  • Suman Kumar Das Suman Kumar Das (12/2/2013 10:02:00 AM)

    My heart got brimmed with love after reading such spectacular song.............................. liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Sekharan Pookkat Sekharan Pookkat (9/25/2013 10:15:00 AM)

    A lovely romantic poem- I like the following lines very much
    Cross miles and miles of endless sea
    I heard you call my name (Report) Reply

  • Abhishek Mishra (9/22/2013 8:15:00 PM)

    a nice rhythmic poem..loved it: -) (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (9/19/2013 8:29:00 AM)

    I really and truly enjoyed this romantic and soothing
    write. I hope that the dream of love will come true.
    Great expressions. (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (9/19/2013 7:08:00 AM)

    Without dreams we have nothing, the poem reaches out to fill an empty heart...luvli! regards and thank you I shall return. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (9/18/2013 10:59:00 AM)

    Nice and left me feel so much thing to say but just cat utterly said_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (9/10/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    'Until that time, I'll only dream
    Of emerald isles and you'
    So sweet! (Report) Reply

  • Alec Latha Alec Latha (9/9/2013 6:10:00 AM)

    yeah girl nice one reach that face (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (9/7/2013 8:24:00 PM)

    it can be read on the tapped beat...beautiful rhythm! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Cassandra Jasmine Cassandra Jasmine (9/5/2013 7:04:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem! Light and airy, yet descriptive. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Jodie Hardy (9/5/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Beautiful, Lovely flowing and light poem, I hope you find the person of your dreams xx (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra Gajanan Mishra (9/5/2013 12:22:00 PM)

    emptyness I like, I know emptyness means fullness, thanks. good write.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment and vote if you pleased. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 16, 2015


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