Empty Inside Poem by Carrol Hoffman

Empty Inside



you left me here to die
you didnt see the tears i cried
you only thought of yourself
you didnt care anymore
you said you loved me
it was all a lie
you left me here to die
now i lay here bleeding inside
i clutch this blade and think i will end it all
you left me here empty inside
no way to recover
no way to speek the pain inside
it should've been you lieing here dieing inside
now i take the blade
push it in my chest
and now i end it all

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Austin Zaratzian 12 May 2008

this is pretty good but you can recover and hopefully he'll learn from his mistakes

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Carrol Hoffman

Carrol Hoffman

fort.smith arkansas
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