Ben Gieske


En Plein Air Sur Terre (Ghazal)


Snuggled in a cocoon en plein air sur terre
Safe from the predator, en plein air sur terre

Nestled in the hubris near the adder’s tongue
Dreading inner shadows, en plein air sur terre

Teetering edges/vulnerability
And a wild sweet aura en plein air sur terre

Suggestion of it hanging/moving in trees
Enticing rendevous en plein air sur terre

Softly touching her face/madness of raw need
Chasing back the shadows en plein air sur terre

Ashes of solitude/like a luna moth
My morning sky turns flame en plein air sur terre

- Nov.5,2007

Pulished on-line by The Ghazal Page, March Issue - 2008
Go To: www.ghazalpage.net/2008/2008_april.html

Submitted: Thursday, January 01, 2009
Edited: Thursday, January 01, 2009

Form:


Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (En Plein Air Sur Terre (Ghazal) by Ben Gieske )

Enter the verification code :

  • Rookie - 324 Points Patti Masterman (7/22/2009 7:36:00 PM)

    Wow, this sizzles with a certain je ne sais quoi (smile) but it's splendidly melodic;
    like a song you want to listen to over and over again. You are truly an inspired artist. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Robert Howard (1/3/2009 1:11:00 AM)

    Quite an ominous poem with that adder lurking around. I admire the way the language crosses over from English to French. Aside from the recurring French phrase, there are several 'first or second generation' French, Latin and Greek words (hubris, vulnerability, aura, rendezvous, luna that seem to smooth the transfer from English to French and back.

    The beauty of the rhythm and sound of the words, I think, is best appreciated when reading the poem aloud. The structure, mood and visual imagery are all masterfully developed. Congratulations. (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  2. 04 Tongues Made Of Glass, Shaun Shane
  3. As I Grew Older, Langston Hughes
  4. Mother to Son, Langston Hughes
  5. I Dream A World, Langston Hughes
  6. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  7. I, Too, Langston Hughes
  8. April Rain Song, Langston Hughes
  9. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  10. Life Is Fine, Langston Hughes

Poem of the Day

THE CHANCELLOR mused as he nibbled his pen
(Sure no Minister ever looked wiser),
And said, “I can summon a million of men
To fight for their country and Kaiser;

...... Read complete »

   

Member Poem

New Poems

  1. On Taking Secretaries to Lunch, Donal Mahoney
  2. The Lizard Said Yes, Tony Adah
  3. For real this time, yashovardhan kulkarni
  4. hey hog rider, does the roof have ricket.., Mandolyn ...
  5. my hair is still growing as fast as the .., Mandolyn ...
  6. New Mexico Sky, Taiko
  7. The Truth Lays, Michael P. McParland
  8. I Pledge My Life Unto Thine Word, Dr John Celes
  9. Hope in the Good, yashovardhan kulkarni
  10. Dogged, Chris Ajiduah
[Hata Bildir]