End It Poem by Trunami ...

End It

Rating: 4.0


Strike
me deep
take me out
silence the screams
my pain is on fire
spitting wisps of charred smoke
dare you pause–you’ll be consumed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 01 February 2006

This one is intense, white-hot and succinct. Excellent.10+ from me. -chuck

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Tan Pratonix 31 January 2006

Great poem. Worth the high rating.

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