Lyn Paul

Veteran Poet - 3,270 Points (17.03.1965)

End Of My Day


Its Never goodbye when your walking alone
The roads you have taken so far from home
You've climbed, breathed life, you've given to all
Opened your heart so willing to fall
The sorrows are buried by the love that we've shared
The smiles, the beauty, the way that you cared

Its time to let go, there is no other way
My life has now ended, Its the end of my day
So cherish the moments the memories will last
You have to move on...
Can't live in the past

So let go, let go
I have no pain
I've seen so much sun shine
And I've truly enjoyed the rain

Let Go, Let Go
My spirit is free
I am moving on
And you will always be with me

The life that we shared was so full of love
I thank you for giving and freeing this dove
I'm flying, I'm watching
Still here for you all
With you...
By your side
If ever you fall



Copyright Reserved July 2014
Lyn Paul

Submitted: Thursday, July 24, 2014
Edited: Thursday, July 24, 2014

Topic of this poem: Farewell


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  • Gold Star - 11,883 Points Valsa George (8/4/2014 12:05:00 AM)

    Now when the time comes for us to go, we can leave the world with no regrets, for we have endured the pain and enjoyed the sweetness!

    I've seen so much sun shine
    And I've truly enjoyed the rain......... Love these lines! | (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,442 Points Amitava Sur (8/3/2014 9:00:00 PM)

    Dear Lyn - thank you for your lovely poem with so much reality and courage. I'll try to take lessens from those words.
    ts time to let go, there is no other way
    My life has now ended, Its the end of my day
    So cherish the moments the memories will last
    You have to move on...
    Can't live in the past ..... no other way left. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,767 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/2/2014 9:00:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Lyn. As always your poem is filled with positivity. I feel its just written for me...
    Very true said, until and unless we never let go our past, we cannot take even a single step towards present.
    We have to get out of past to move forward by convincing self. Positive flow of words in each lines. Loved the way you presented it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,206 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/29/2014 1:21:00 AM)

    So let go, let go
    I have no pain
    I've seen so much sun shine
    And I've truly enjoyed the rain

    such loveliness in this awe-inspiring refrain! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,609 Points Hazel Durham (7/27/2014 8:22:00 AM)

    You capture the beauty of living and the release of our souls as we enter a new beginning at the end of our day!
    Beautiful, inspired write Lyn! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 5,442 Points Amitava Sur (7/26/2014 6:43:00 AM)

    It's a lovely poem Lyn, which gives a lovely feeling.
    Yes very true that at the end of the life the mind should have a feeling of
    Let Go, Let Go
    My spirit is free (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 781 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/24/2014 7:30:00 PM)

    We will meet upon a suns streak
    Somewhere beyond ecstasy
    Touch fingertips as we fly
    To this world goodbye (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,878 Points Valerie Dohren (7/24/2014 5:37:00 PM)

    A very beautiful and moving poem Lyn. Perhaps the end of life is a form of moving on. Very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,226 Points Sandra Feldman (7/24/2014 5:15:00 PM)

    You're ever generosity and feelings towards others is so appreciated tin this lovely poem, as well as your fortitude with dealing with a time that has past and will not return..
    Takes a lot of courage! But you have it and poetic talent too (Report) Reply

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