Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 12,005 Points (17.03.1965)

End Of My Day - Poem by Lyn Paul

Its Never goodbye when your walking alone
The roads you have taken so far from home
You've climbed, breathed life, you've given to all
Opened your heart so willing to fall
The sorrows are buried by the love that we've shared
The smiles, the beauty, the way that you cared

Its time to let go, there is no other way
My life has now ended, Its the end of my day
So cherish the moments the memories will last
You have to move on...
Can't live in the past

So let go, let go
I have no pain
I've seen so much sun shine
And I've truly enjoyed the rain

Let Go, Let Go
My spirit is free
I am moving on
And you will always be with me

The life that we shared was so full of love
I thank you for giving and freeing this dove
I'm flying, I'm watching
Still here for you all
With you...
By your side
If ever you fall



Copyright Reserved July 2014
Lyn Paul

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Comments about End Of My Day by Lyn Paul

  • Silver Star - 4,266 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (6/14/2015 3:07:00 PM)

    A touching and therapeutic treasure that is.loaded woth love and moving memories. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,724 Points Herbert Guitang (5/16/2015 6:58:00 PM)

    Full of gravity inside your poem and the heart will let go from the arms of love
    Great writing (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,083 Points Bill Galvin (2/27/2015 1:13:00 PM)

    Wonderful and moving and helpful to me. Lyn, you praised my work, so I looked for yours, and this was the first I selected. Serendipity that this one was apropos to my grieving process. Thank you so much for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 60 Points Amitie Moto Wa Abedi (8/14/2014 6:25:00 PM)

    Your poems are really great. I like your style and the emotion that your poems express. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,113 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (8/6/2014 12:08:00 PM)

    Wow one of yor best in rhymin and poetic content. Kudos poetess! Soo Nice to read u again. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,860 Points Dave Walker (8/6/2014 4:49:00 AM)

    Memories are what can keep us going, a great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,881 Points Valsa George (8/4/2014 12:05:00 AM)

    Now when the time comes for us to go, we can leave the world with no regrets, for we have endured the pain and enjoyed the sweetness!

    I've seen so much sun shine
    And I've truly enjoyed the rain......... Love these lines! | (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,829 Points Amitava Sur (8/3/2014 9:00:00 PM)

    Dear Lyn - thank you for your lovely poem with so much reality and courage. I'll try to take lessens from those words.
    ts time to let go, there is no other way
    My life has now ended, Its the end of my day
    So cherish the moments the memories will last
    You have to move on...
    Can't live in the past ..... no other way left. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,607 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/2/2014 7:58:00 PM)

    You have to move on...
    Can't live in the past
    Beautiful message delivered in the poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/2/2014 9:00:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem Lyn. As always your poem is filled with positivity. I feel its just written for me...
    Very true said, until and unless we never let go our past, we cannot take even a single step towards present.
    We have to get out of past to move forward by convincing self. Positive flow of words in each lines. Loved the way you presented it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,107 Points Diane Hine (7/29/2014 8:11:00 PM)

    A really comforting poem, beautifully written. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,250 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/29/2014 1:21:00 AM)

    So let go, let go
    I have no pain
    I've seen so much sun shine
    And I've truly enjoyed the rain

    such loveliness in this awe-inspiring refrain! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,917 Points Hazel Durham (7/27/2014 8:22:00 AM)

    You capture the beauty of living and the release of our souls as we enter a new beginning at the end of our day!
    Beautiful, inspired write Lyn! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,829 Points Amitava Sur (7/26/2014 6:43:00 AM)

    It's a lovely poem Lyn, which gives a lovely feeling.
    Yes very true that at the end of the life the mind should have a feeling of
    Let Go, Let Go
    My spirit is free (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/24/2014 7:30:00 PM)

    We will meet upon a suns streak
    Somewhere beyond ecstasy
    Touch fingertips as we fly
    To this world goodbye (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,680 Points Valerie Dohren (7/24/2014 5:37:00 PM)

    A very beautiful and moving poem Lyn. Perhaps the end of life is a form of moving on. Very well written. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,181 Points Sandra Feldman (7/24/2014 5:15:00 PM)

    You're ever generosity and feelings towards others is so appreciated tin this lovely poem, as well as your fortitude with dealing with a time that has past and will not return..
    Takes a lot of courage! But you have it and poetic talent too (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 17, 2015


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