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Unwritten Soul

End of Time

Wild breeze sighing cold
Looking a chance to enter this room
The rain tears dripping
Kissed on my windows
Oh what a sorrowful midnight

Today a bit different,
Room without moonlight
Silent, lame and dark
Withstand cold, surfaced on my skin
Hold my arm tight, keep warm inside
I wake up and staring outside

Everywhere just so dark
Only you, a candle
Stand bravely
On the side of this table
Shower the light in this space
Tonight only us, you and me
In the bright island middle of the dark sea

Together we stay tonight
As close as i can reach you
Feel the touch of your light
As far as your touch invading me
Send warm deeper, core of my body
As deeper as you now illuminating me
Straight to my soul, release your spirit in me

This silent night
Via the light, i listened all
Your spirit embracing my soul
Whispering deep precious words
About life, of you as for me
In age of your length, you burn it all
Sacrifice all you have till nothing left
Say you will bright the dark till end of life

Through the shaken windows,
The lost wind enter and flows
Flying in each corner
Wander all the edges
Come and meet you my candle
Sway your flames for a dance
Whispered in the soft moves
Seduction to surrender
To lose a guard of spirit
Convinced to live in cold ambiance
Dont trust! , you tell me as this life is not a trade
Said, 'Believing sweet lies made strength to fade
My heat is a spirit, in this light another form of it
I was made to bright not created to be wasted'

But we know sometimes it's hard to keep bright
And i saw you sometimes warmly cried
Drop down, Your tears flows
Drop down, another goes
It's not a shame, nor to loose
You told me, cry may dissolve a feeling
Let it down, these tears wax for better stand
Stronger base and the broken will mend

Only with a single flame,
Darkness lost by your light charm
Nothing you left before you warm
Remind me, In life, in the length of age
Flames yourself to brighten the road
As soon it be so clear to travel anywhere
Even make a dream emerged from nightmare

Those words, the touch
Your warmth, tucked me in a dream
Protect me from cold, the whole night
Till I lost you in the morning
You gone and forever leave me
But your spirit united in my soul
Released through your warm, by your light
For me to warm when it's cold, be bright when it's dark

Tomorrow could be beautiful as always
Somehow in a good day in a crowd
Leaving to spend a time alone far away
To feel and remember our last day
The moment you waxed all your words in me

Till the end of time,
The end of my breathe,
I wont give up on anything
As my life not a waste
As you said

: : : : : : : : : : : : : A Spirit to protect: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : :
The first poem from my 'Rise from the Ashes' project, i always feel like a child, to speak everything around and they replied me. I use many things around to learn about how they spending their life. For me there's always a reason to inspire our life, to heal brokenness, even to be better by looking around us, either dark or bright. A candle, alone can bright a part of room, and you alone can bright your own life..No one cant help if you cant trust yourself..As we keep our spirit alive, there's a door out for anything. Well like 'my friend, candle' said life not to waste.. Nothing is precious like you..uniquely you :) ..Thanks for reading this long poem :) :)
Cheers! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

2nd poem from my project: Desert Rose

Submitted: Sunday, October 16, 2011
Edited: Saturday, November 12, 2011

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  • Kevin Patrick (5/22/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    A very touching poem, with an amazing spiritual side, extremly quotable. Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (11/14/2012 9:50:00 PM)

    Loved the line -life is not to waste.Really, we alone can solve our problem. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/15/2012 4:24:00 AM)

    Each one is unique and each one can brighten up his life if he so chooses. Like a candle, we are to shed light around us! Lofty thoughts and a great poem! (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu (9/21/2012 7:11:00 PM)

    My dear friend! As I was reading your poem a bird came to sing and I felt how a soul can connect to another and how spirit may travel and spread its love. In my soul I saw you as the bird outside my window singing love songs. A human ear is always alert to beauty such is my soul to your words. Heartfelt thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Walterrean Salley (9/15/2012 10:06:00 AM)

    I was made to bright not created to be wasted'

    Till the end of time,
    The end of my breathe,
    I wont give up on anything
    As my life not a waste
    As you said

    A poem of value and great depth, beautiful and soothing. Through keen observation, powerful lessons herein, are taught by a simple and familiar object- the candle.

    Full of life lesson: Learn to sacrifice till nothing's left... Tt's okay to cry, it releases our fellings... Believing sweet lies made one's strength to fade...

    Good teaching, Soul. And thank you for this wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (8/25/2012 12:35:00 PM)

    you captured the essence of the spirit and the loneliness of the human heart so beautifully. love the poet's notes! :) (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (7/19/2012 7:19:00 AM)

    Powerful poem clever to use the candle with so much original ways to bring it into your soul, its liken to candle in the wind and the down fall of the queen of diamonds...only the strength of the poem I mean...+++10 regards (Report) Reply

  • Jodie Cooper (12/3/2011 9:38:00 AM)

    your poems are so insperational to me you are one of the best writers and i am now a fan of this poem i have rated it a deffinate 10 if 100 was on the scale this would be on it ;) (Report) Reply

  • Sonali Sings (11/13/2011 12:28:00 AM)

    There's much written about the candle n you, and the charisma you both have created in this poem of yours, , , no words left for me to say, except, simply excellent! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Harindhar Reddy (11/10/2011 11:50:00 AM)

    Candle became pawn in the hands of master craftswoman. Are you you chess player or what! You poem Portrayed the just of the life. the spirit of live. The very essence of the life is out spoken here!
    'Only you, a candle
    Stand bravely
    On the side of this table'
    More than your imagery is of perfect class with classicism. You poem has some magnet with it which pulls the attention any reader, I mention here with glee. Ha! ha! ha! Many smiles for your poem and your talent :) :) :) (Report) Reply

  • Amir Forougi (10/25/2011 1:27:00 PM)

    How smartly you play with the words...The fluctuation of emotions are flooding in this poem...I liked it alot (Report) Reply

  • Shadow Girl (10/20/2011 9:17:00 AM)

    very beautiful and huge meaning...could drown in the depth of your words...heart warming and outstanding. You are a true poet. (Report) Reply

  • Stefanie Fontker (10/19/2011 8:40:00 PM)

    So very beautiful. Your soul is pure, and certainly written, my friend. Keep on speaking til your heart stops. (Report) Reply

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