Enjoy First Creation Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Enjoy First Creation

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Muse never refuses
But entertains and always pleases
For new comers or old as well
To speak for self and reveal

The simple form is available
With simple poet or as an individual
Where he does first attempt
With verses and that too prompt

It is like “person scaling highest peak”
For which he considered himself very weak
He has no reason now to disbelieve
But go on with dreams to relive

We need to pick threads from future
Morning cool breeze provides new hope for sure
It shows how quickly they may disappear
Yet they are here for you with no fear

Cuckoo airs melody for nothing in return
Yet she has joy in providing melody for human
Every one plays little of his part
Nature too is with you always from the start

Always enjoy first creation
That remains in memory as golden collection
“Try to forget it” and you won’t be able to
Some of the happy moments are always with you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 22 January 2014

every moment is happy moment, it depends on our thinking. good writing sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Creation Chastity King26 minutes ago Good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Mitos Jane Nepomuceno YÖHÒÓ 3 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 Mitos Jane Nepomuceno You are indeed an awesome, amazing poet, and a true friend. Stay blessed & be a blessing to many my dear HAZ :))) about a minute ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Lisa Lombardi ur poems r light and hv a deep msg. like that 10 minutes ago · Edited · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome memricel remirez a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

Muse never refuses But entertains and always pleases For new comers or old as well

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 January 2014

:) Ruth Brebner37 minutes ago Enjoyed this poem, i particularly like the stanza about the Cuckoo - it was a nice, accessible concept for explaining the role of nature that you were trying to describe. The poem also has a very philosophical feel to it, like it was well thought out which was really cool. Well done! Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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