Enrichment Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Enrichment

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes,
too much weight on the soul
breaks the mind,
hurts the whole.
Nature splits its decisions
and agony burns.

With the tauntings
of life, and the fear
of its hauntings
the blood of ones thoughts
intermingles in crisis.

And what of the soul?
it absorbs most of this.
Expands and grows stronger
as the mind is enriched.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
T S 22 August 2009

A hurting soul is soon to mend and stronger it will become Beautiful Poetry A 10 plus from me Tracy x

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Sally P. P. 10 January 2020

Thank you for your lovely comment, T S.

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nomad omnia 21 August 2009

Excellent Sally, I can feel the weight, but the balance of the piece makes it enjoyable to bear. N

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Sally 18 August 2022

Thanks for your comment, Nomad

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Tom Balch 14 August 2009

A great piece Sally, the last stanza is just brilliant,10 Regards Tom

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Sally 09 September 2022

Dear Tom, Thankyou for your welcome comment

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Haverhill Suffolk England
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