Entry Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Rating: 4.9


“Welcome to our new world family”
Words sounded me good and not silly
It created deep impact on mind
I though of gesture to be nice and kind

New entrants will find it very difficult
New environment with different cult
Readers, friends, pattern also new
May be new approach was definitely due

How to speak about one’s mind?
People may not take it lightly and turn eyes blind
It may be possible they may not accept and rescind
Still it has to be honest attempt and way to find

I cut joke and call self as Jadia or fat
May not go in ground to play cricket with bat
At the most they may cut joke and hate
I have no reason to feel amused and state

I have always felt that jokes are good medicines
As disease disappear after taking vaccines
Jokes and loud laugh make blood to rush in vanes
Fresh air and wind make trees to bend in by lanes

Does the honesty pay in the long run?
Can anything be extracted at the point of gun?
What role does the comments and feed back play?
Beautiful ideas to float and make it relay

I may love to be part of large community
It will have its impact and continuity
New concept, ideas may find the real place
Right place and recognition without any race

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ritul Soni 13 November 2009

may be possible they may not accept and rescind Still it has to be honest attempt and way to find

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Chand Shikari 13 November 2009

I cut joke and call self as Jadia or fat May not go in ground to play cricket with bat At the most they may cut joke and hate

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Mahananda Pittle Jaswantlal 13 November 2009

At the most they may cut joke and hate I have no reason to feel amused and state

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Bhanubhai Montu Shah 13 November 2009

At the most they may cut joke and hate I have no reason to feel amused and state

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Pradip Pillai 13 November 2009

have always felt that jokes are good medicines As disease disappear after taking vaccines

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Rajaram Ramachandran 17 November 2009

This is an entry that covers a variety of topics at one place.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 November 2009

In mod society we’ve a sign post planted in brain of ‘no entry’. World has become a Global-Villa [not village LOL! ] We too can’t’ nether stay in or come out en masse. The call of the day. Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Please find new posts and looking for your comments niv

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Anju Addanki 15 November 2009

i can just say super duper

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Jigar Mehta 15 November 2009

“Welcome to our new world family” Words sounded me good and not silly It created deep impact on mind

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 15 November 2009

''can anything be extracted at the point of gun...'' The line indicated that the world cud not be surveil under the terrorism...nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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