Ephemera Poem by leonard daranjo

Ephemera

Rating: 5.0


My time in life
Is a minute in all eternity
A string in the universal harp
A note in the cosmic concerto

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Atina 17 May 2008

Lovely poem Leonard, glad to join the symphony. Cheers Anita

0 0 Reply
Abha Sharma 17 May 2008

A minuscule to infinity A memo to this celestial performance Joined by the filament of gasp An existence in creation Life is transitory and we are very much insignificant in comparison to time and space…a minute to eternity is a well drawn contrast… The other two metaphorical contrast are equally deep and beautiful.. Your writing is different and it provides a solid food for thought…. Abha

0 0 Reply
Estrella Baldemosa 17 May 2008

I agree...clear in spite of brevity which is good...

0 0 Reply
Joseph Poewhit 17 May 2008

Very well said, in few words

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success