Epic Of Life- Part-1 Poem by Ratnakar Mandlik

Epic Of Life- Part-1

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The omnipresence of ocean felt at Ganapatipule
The aggression of tides on shore for confluence
Of the sea ordained by the Almighty with the soil
Imprints on our soul, oh Lord, a sublime inluence.


The grayish silky sand with minute graguels
Spread on the beach on too thick layers
Housing prawns, crabs n what not in their holes
Shining in sunlight as an expanse of silver.

Lifelong penance of palms on the slopes
Alongwith the mangotrees guarding the beach
Are also spectators and they set-up the pitch
For galloping tides, in pledging to elope.

Chirping of the birds sets in the dawn
Melody of nightingale reminds night bygone.
The mist shields for a while the vast expanse
Of sea water which may be longing in a trance.

Enticing however is roaring of the surfs
And the glittering tides in rays of infant Sun.
Celestial is the melody produced by the collusion
With rocky shores by thundering surfs.
Poet: Ratnakar D Mandlik

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 09 December 2020

This is an extraordinary write....very respectable beyond rating and commenting...pranams

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Savita Tyagi 26 October 2018

Ocean shore so vivid and picturesque comes alive in Epic Of Life Poem. Vastness of ocean holds an epic fascination in our life. Thank you for sharing. Many thanks for visiting and commenting on my new poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2018

A beautiful philosophical poem on life having touching expression with nice diction. Thanks for sharing.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 September 2016

Dear Ratnakar ji, i am most happy to read your series on 'Epic of life.' This poem on Ganapatipule is remarkably envisioned. After reading your poem, i feel like making a trip to Ganapatipule to comprehend and enjoy each word in your poem. Full 10....

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 April 2016

In pledging to elope! Nice work.

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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Hyderabad(A.P.) , India
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