Dr subhendu kar

Rookie - 196 Points (Bhubaneswar, Orissa, India)

Epilogue Of Last Meet - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

tell me the story after the last meet
earth when reels round after sunset
it all may be you and me by the hearts
lest be some one from the crowd
yet in the deep night not by the darkness

a thin film of love when stuck in hide
as it reels by the shadow of dark and light
as you sleep for the day’s rest aftermath
the whispers may nudge you to wake

yet not by your desire
passion still drills in slumber
moments yet brighter than the day
even sun rises somewhere on the earth
flower when razzle in blue by the warmth

And I touch upon tunes when attuned to myth
by the gleams of love swinging on the star
the muse when walks hand in hand
across the mirth when blossoms red

yet not virtual not the true by the glimpses
still love do exist beyond the history when unveiled
still night breaths faster festering its blackness
when in tucking away by the epilogue of last meet


Comments about Epilogue Of Last Meet by Dr subhendu kar

  • Veteran Poet - 1,563 Points Marieta Maglas (6/13/2009 12:10:00 PM)

    ''And I touch upon tunes when attuned to myth
    by the gleams of love swinging on the star''
    wonderful...touch...10++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Thad Wilk (4/12/2008 8:53:00 PM)

    A splendid write Dr. Kar, a delightful read very well executed! ! *10*! !
    Best regards! Friend Thad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 57 Points Yuri Duraan (4/12/2008 5:31:00 PM)

    You weave a fuzzy blanket of words... comforting with lots of colours. Yuri (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 12, 2008



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