Ero Prose Poem by Louie Levy

Ero Prose



Thoughts begin feelings
of sin within
flesh and bones
Festering moralists
infecting clones

Energies driven
Power of love
Paths to warmth...
between pillars
upholding our very being

Ecstasy awaits!
penetrations,
sensations,
revelations

'Seeds of Life'
within an nesting egg
Orgasmic creations

'Universal Displays'

(c) 1999

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Comments from. jbstillwater.com- Guests On 1/31/2009 JFarrugia (James Farrugia) drafted these words: Proż a t'Ero Ħ sibijiet jibdew ħ sibijiet ta'dnub ġ ol- laħ am u l-għ adam moralisti Irritati jinfettaw il-klowns Is-saħ ħ a ta'l-imħ abba passaġ ġ i għ as-sħ ana immexxijin bl-enerġ iji... bejn pilastri li julzaw lilna nfusna L-Estasija tistenna! id-dħ ul ġ o, is-sensazzjonijiet ir-revelazzjonijiet 'Iż -Ż erriegħ a tal-Ħ ajja' ġ o bejta ta'bajda krejazzjonijiet Orgaż miċ i 'Xhieda Universali' I thought I'd translate this poem of yours into Maltese since there are few such styled and such thematic poems in Maltese, and yours does justice to such styles and themes. Very direct, rhyming, and truthful. Sabiħ a ħ afna sieħ bi. James On 6/4/2008 LouieLevy (Louie Levy) uttered these words: Dear Friends; I'm confessionally happy to have this writ sneak out of my proverbial 'Closet'. We are all composed. within or without, Love is Omnipotent, to be shared without guilt and rewarded with 'Peace' from within. My naughty Muse, is now laughing up my sleeve. ...louie On 6/1/2008 Bravestone (Ian Adam Bravestone) proclaimed these words: Sir, My neglect of this site for the last few months has removed me from some masterful verse. This being part of the sum. To accept the buring within, and contemplate its mysterious pursuasion is a poets honor, and gives hope to both the celebate and the driven. When the moralists shy from the spark that created even them- we are all tarnished. So, I applaud your courage, my dear friend, and wish you profoud joy- as you help bring acceptance to that which the cherubim envy. On 5/26/2008 Peggie Lee (Peggie Devan) said these words: Wonderfully written poem, Louie. 'Universal Displays' for sure..as Cole Porter wrote..'even the birds and bees do it...' On 5/25/2008 Granh (Granville Holt) declared these words: Good to be alive and know it, indeed, Gran On 5/16/2008 triciastar (Tricia Star Page) drafted these words: Human desire burns written with excellence as is your gift real and to the point. I always enjoy the privilege of viewing your talent. Patti

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