Error Poem by Sandra van Coppenhagen

Error



to error is human
to forgive devine
yet her past kills her
slowly inside
you wanted to save her
but her soul is now gone
she chained it to the walls
the walls you burned down

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Lady Grace 16 June 2009

beautiful poem and nicely done..error is only a slight fault..grace

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Mark Smith 03 July 2008

I like, very cool. Short yes, the ending powerful.

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Fred Babbin 25 June 2008

All your poems are prose poetry, but they cut very, very, deep.

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