Eternal..Love… Poem by SALINI NAIR
Eternal..Love…
A golden sheaf that she knead
In silence talk to dreams
Solitude that lift her
The dreams that take to heights
There she flew inside dreams
On the way there spot two eyes
There could feel the deepness of hope
On that shore she hugs that dream
Miles that passed and love all way
Breeze quote can one love like this
Shore grieve; even sea don’t cares me like this
All way jealousy that garland
Even she whisper on the deepness of her love
But the eyes never notice its warmth
On another shore he frame his love
Yet she hugs her love as her breathe
The love still flow to that side
On a huge ship that wave reaches his shore
Some way the breeze told him about her love
The lament love started to the shore
On voyage that passes all hazards
An iceberg that jealous to her love
Hit the side and sink to deep
Silently
On another shore
Still on her dreams she loves him
Days pass and one day on that lonely shore
Eternal ship wharfs and; fetched his love! ! !
©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.
As ever, Love wins over the gusts and thunderous confusions of life, in legends and in real. Storms are meant to add strength to the ambiance of love. Obstacles often help to measure the worth and depth of every human passions. unbounded are hinderance and confusion sin real life these days, and in love it is noted much with more care as love itself reigns over all the passions of the mortals, whose absolute aim is to become immortal by means of the worth and devotion submitted to love. Your versification, purely in my opinion, would have been still better with the mechanics of compositions duly concerned. Sweetly penned and enjoyable read. God Bless.
An iceberg that jealous on her love hit the side and sink in deep....The end of love is in sorrowness and poet beautifully carved a very nice poem of love in beautiful words which have the fragrance of feeling no doubt.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/22/2024 11:06:32 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Well done........................