Eternal Meaning Poem by Drake Kinkaid

Eternal Meaning

Rating: 5.0


Killing the breath of all yours
Creating an inevitable space for the consciousness
Nothing left in this place besides a body
Concern smashed into my face
All is done now beside the wonder of setting the pace
The expectations are limitless
I just leap onto their level to show what I mean, without the support they'll have nothing to lean
An on going pressure of my being
Attractive parade of trials
Uneasy behind the scenes of these walls
saturating everything within a reach
Just lay back and endure the free fall
Then we should arrive at the place you decide to meet
We are standing on tacs with our hands engulfed in silver

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 19 October 2008

this one I really like great job just like Yoonoos said you got the ‘A’ and I like the message so the reader not only likes it they get something out of it… writing for a purpose, sometimes we do it without thought. I like the line just lay back and endure the free fall. *Purkey Girl*

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