Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Rookie - 1 Points (November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

Eternal Race - Poem by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Thunder chases
The sleek lightening, only
A streak but so bright it steals the
Vast sky.

Comments about Eternal Race by Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

  • Rookie - 23 Points Abdullah Jamil (6/25/2012 7:58:00 AM)

    Very nice! ! ! I can't believe you are 16 only! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,670 Points Rajendran Muthiah (6/24/2012 12:46:00 AM)

    In the eternal, unending race between thunder and lightning, lightning will always be the winner. Shakespeare has said: There is so much noise and fury signifying nothing.The reverberations of thunder ma be last longing. But lightecomes sudden and finishes its work in a second and vanishes. Wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (6/23/2012 9:05:00 PM)

    Brevity in language can often be the source of aesthetic clarity as provided here. It can also inspire longer poems as related ideas are later developed further. My poem Seeds was like this with the second verse existing alone for 5 years until the concept of the 3 stages of ignorance, knowledge and wisdom were developed. Keep up the great writing. Similarly my short poem Listless chill reminds me of your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,138 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (6/23/2012 12:50:00 AM)

    Nice again. Speed and sparkling gem......I also have to bright it steals the / Vast sky......Pranab k c 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,015 Points Soulful Heart (6/18/2012 8:18:00 AM)

    that really stole my imagination :) .............keep it up and u can take it as a theme and elaborate into beautiful poem............good luck (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,821 Points Ramesh Rai (6/17/2012 11:24:00 PM)

    Eternal race is to achieve the eternal goal of life. Absolutely a nice poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 4, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 11, 2012

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