Okami Kamikaze

Rookie (1991 / Oklahoma)

Eternal Silence - Poem by Okami Kamikaze

Silence
Silence when we are walking,
Silence when we think,
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Comments about Eternal Silence by Okami Kamikaze

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2009 7:46:00 PM)

    Silence
    Silence when we are walking,
    Silence when we think,
    Silence is what fills us all,
    With a binding eternal link.
    silence is our choice...10 good poem to be enjoyed...10

    read mine you go alone and silence please.... why we need rest? (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (1/28/2009 7:24:00 PM)

    This is a wonderful way of addressing an issue that is ever present but never
    addressed. I was also impressed by the structure you chose to express it.
    Repetition is excellant and warranted to make the point. I was very pleased.

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  • Rookie Bethany Seed (10/29/2008 5:32:00 PM)

    wow this is a very gd poem! keep on wrighting!

    best of wishis
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