Marieta Maglas

Veteran Poet - 1,220 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Eternity Of Silence - Poem by Marieta Maglas

The wings were struggling
On a leaden sky,
Distorting the space and time
Sinusoidally...

The eternity of silence,
Was dividing my morbidity,
It was separating the flight
From the oblivion....

I needed to escape
From the illusion, that absorbs everything
And from the disillusionment, that digest all....

So, give me your warm hand.
I know, it is a hand of a man.
My fingers will touch you
And I will kiss your silence.

You can give me the strength
To continue
The great symphony of life.


Comments about Eternity Of Silence by Marieta Maglas

  • Rookie Iron Panda 23™ (3/4/2010 9:34:00 AM)

    10/10 is just the beginning of my vote xP

    230000000++++ (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Rayan Ali (12/4/2009 10:14:00 AM)

    silence is the best answer to every question..a very nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Steve Wilkeson (11/16/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    silence seems to be the answer.....
    10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yacov Mitchenko (11/11/2009 6:19:00 AM)

    In everyday life, we're often confused; life makes many demands on us; we generally live superficially, under the spell of may illusions. But love and the silence of which you speak give us the strength to keep going and attain to glimpses of the divine. Good poem.


    If you have time, please read 'Dante and His Three Beatrices' and 'The Epileptic Fit'. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (11/4/2009 10:13:00 PM)

    The Book of Genesis tells us that God created all things from eternal silence and
    nothingness! We meditate in silence to get closer to Him, since He resides deep within our silent being! Thanks for your thought provoking poem! 10!
    -Raj (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Margaret Donaghy (10/30/2009 1:44:00 PM)

    nice presentation of desire and what a lovely desire to be with one....great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Seraza Uzuner (10/29/2009 5:41:00 PM)

    I enjoyed reading this piece. Beautifully pictured. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (10/27/2009 9:38:00 AM)

    agreed.. yes, the eternity of silence is like what you expressed here.. let me say...
    voices go fad out,
    lights turn off,
    breathes stop out,
    life ends of
    but the silent stay for ever...

    yeah..you wrote this poem very sweet way..loved it and really a sweet and great one...well done..10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie moribund love (10/26/2009 10:39:00 AM)

    thought provoking! 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 446 Points Indira Renganathan (10/23/2009 8:30:00 AM)

    The great symphony of life....you've very rightly said it....nice reading....thank you (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,220 Points Marieta Maglas (10/20/2009 2:39:00 PM)

    From: Dona Lil Antonio (Manila Philippines; Female; 29)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 10/19/2009 12: 19: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: hi


    ive gone through your poems they were all awesome and written in deep feelings.
    keep writing and keep inspiring others to make good crafts as well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anand Madhukar (10/13/2009 11:13:00 AM)

    A beautifully written piece.10 without doubt. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Agnes Parker (10/2/2009 7:40:00 AM)

    This is a touching and great poem.................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Abigail Roscoe (9/30/2009 1:39:00 PM)

    Very goog imagery, metaphor................ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 43 Points Obinna Eruchie (9/29/2009 9:48:00 AM)

    The poem is beautifully penned, as usual. -Eternity of silence+++. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tyrone Allen (9/29/2009 8:25:00 AM)

    cool poem everything about this poem was nice. silence (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (9/29/2009 2:59:00 AM)

    there's no such a quiet life except in a silence.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rakesh Bedi (9/29/2009 12:47:00 AM)

    I need to save myself from me....., who doesn't, marieta...? ? ? Right you are; silence seems to be the answer........oherwise, the phrases...silence is bliss....silence is gold....., why, what for? ? A thought provoking poem, dear..... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2009 7:34:00 PM)

    You give me the necessary strength,
    So much desired, to continue
    The great symphony of life.........beaitiful presentation of desire and what a lovely desire to be with one....great poem....10

    read mine come home..... home bound....no separate ways....divorce (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (9/19/2009 12:08:00 PM)

    ‘And when my fingers will touch you,
    I will kiss your silence’

    Wow! ! Nice wordsmithing.
    Enjoyed and listening silence.
    dr. sakti (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 18, 2013


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