Ethere Poem by chandra thiagarajan

Ethere

Rating: 5.0


Muse
You are
My sweet heart
Giving pleasure
Thinking and reading
Poets thoughts suffuse me
Over come with happiness
At the contents when inspiring
I am completely swept off my feet
With the poem echoing in my mind deep.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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*An Ethere has 10 lines and no pattern of rhythm or rhyme. Each line
Contains the same no: of syllables as its line no.

There is also a Reverse Ethere, which is the opposite (1st line contains 10syllables,2nd has nine, etc.,) and also a Double Ethere, which usually Consists of an Ethere followed by a Reverse Ethere.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 06 August 2013

Chandra, you familiarize us with new forms and styles of verse! As you feel, Muse is our pleasurable companion, taking us to wonderful stretches of fancy and fun, and helping us drown our little griefs! A great Ethere! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2013

Beautiful write. We can learn many new things from you..A Great Ethere! Love to learn always something new...Thank your for sharing with us.

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David Wood 09 August 2013

A brilliant addaption beautifully put.

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Valerie Dohren 08 August 2013

Interesting poetic form Chandra - there are so many with which I am unfamiliar. This is good.

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Dave Walker 08 August 2013

Short and sweet, a great poem.

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Heather Wilkins 07 August 2013

a good etheree muse you are my sweet heart, nice

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 August 2013

You have created a nice Ethere breaking your lines appropriately in a natural way. That shows your command of the language and great skill. Beautifully rendered.

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