Deb Panda

Rookie - 178 Points (1992 / KEONJHAR, ODISHA, INDIA)

Evening Lamp!


Oh’Muse!
You appear at this cross-
Upon the rising flame of earthen lamp
Lighted- in my evening prayer,
Flickering and steady with the wind!

I see you protect this pen;
With the dazzling shield-
When darkness delves deep into it-
Held high; with all kindness in reward!

Joyous- for this journey starts there.
And I reserve this flame for ages-
For my soul finds its temple,
That will go down generation, with undying luster;
Tomorrow -when they discover themselves in darkness!

Submitted: Friday, April 04, 2014
Edited: Friday, April 04, 2014

Topic of this poem: prayer


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

To-...5.. This was written in darkness....read this in darkness...... Light the earthen lamp, that won't flicker....
I find a eventful day brought to halt at the arrival of my guest! .....

and the lines are the witness, with the silent dazzling flame....

Comments about this poem (Evening Lamp! by Deb Panda )

  • Rookie - 104 Points Yash Shinde (4/5/2014 11:45:00 AM)

    ...........great sketch painted with a pen.........may light of lamp show you way through dark.........lovely poem..... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,614 Points Amitava Sur (4/4/2014 8:21:00 PM)

    A lovely imagery being drwn with a firm belief on almighty.
    I see you protect this pen;
    With the dazzling shield ....... enjoyd (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,042 Points Hazel Durham (4/4/2014 4:33:00 PM)

    Your muse takes away the darkness from your soul lighting the way with kindness and joy!
    Deep and beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kamalesh Mohanta (4/4/2014 8:37:00 AM)

    Hey Dev!
    It seems like I was lonely in the darkness, without the luster of ur poems. Hats off to your noble work. Meet our new generation poet. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,864 Points Patricia Grantham (4/4/2014 6:47:00 AM)

    Very enlightening and amusing. Your muse lights up
    your darkness. See only great events! Nice. (Report) Reply

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