Every Time Poem by Anjali Das

Every Time

Rating: 4.5


Every time I think I've won,
I fail again.
Evey time I reach an end,
a new path lies ahead of me.
Every time I see a light,
Darkness falls again in my eyes.
Every time I whisper,
a scream takes birth.
Every time I feel you,
you walk back to my unknowns.
Every time my lonely heart beats,
a symphony flows.
Every time a tear drop falls,
Rain follows.

Monday, May 27, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: longing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.k Das 27 May 2013

'Every time a tear drop falls, Rain follows.' it is a beautiful poem, , the way it ends is still more beautiful... thanx

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Anjali. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thanks

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Khairul Ahsan 15 July 2013

Every time a tear drop falls, Rain follows. What a nice expression, liked it. Poets love to explore the enigma as life unfolds its mysteries.

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Ramesh Rai 03 June 2013

beautiful write. love ot

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A great metaphor of the journey, taken despite all odds... Faith is the thing with feathers... great write.... keep it up.......

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R.k Das 27 May 2013

Every time a tear drop falls, Rain follows. - - - - -a very very nice poem, , with an undertone of pathos, , , a very sensitive treatment of the emotion, , , keep it up, ,

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