...Evoluting The Evolution.. Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

...Evoluting The Evolution..

Rating: 4.2


No aim of fixedness always flexible
the oneness carried from protozoans
sluggishly moving distinctly in damp
slipping in dry replicating molluscans
venerating the dream of uprightness
spin, jump, swim to clone chordates
making way in soil perforating cavities
to bore, coil and drill like annelids
personified to organize wet outpost
still growing and duplicating anthropods
leaping from land to moisture parchments
to cover the difference in amphibians
the ability to ascend maturing into
venomous weapons as tentacles formed in reptilians
augmenting the multi-cellular process
to unmixed units of mammalians
all features encompassed in sensing
the sixth to feel in bones etched
to retain and double even to multiply
inheriting the characteristics deceitfully.

Wednesday, September 2, 2009
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 02 September 2009

......the sixth to feel in bones etched.....; are you sure? ? ? I think it lies in ones sub-conscious.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 September 2009

augmenting the multi-cellular process to unmixed units of mammallians all features encompassed in sensing the sixth to feel in bones etched..................................wonderful write, , , , , , , , , , , , , , and i do remember words of Darwin on Evolution, , , , 'the descends with modifications', utterly brain storming meandering ahead,10++, thanks

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Omar Ibrahim 02 September 2009

that was really great....great job and thanks for sharing your fine poetry with us..

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 02 September 2009

the poem is 19 lines. Almost short and almost long. It is good.

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 02 September 2009

Very impressive and potential..........

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Claude H Oliver Ii 16 September 2009

i enjoyed the progression of the creative process.

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Rachel Butler 07 September 2009

spin, jump, swim to clone chordatans making way in soil perforating cavities to bore Rachel Ann Butler

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Mystic Indian 03 September 2009

just felt life come to life in your verses.10/10

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Chitra - 03 September 2009

what a great poem! ...with strong expressions and hard hitting lines wonderful!

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Zeinab Sherif 02 September 2009

n...i...c...e....w.....o....r....k......10

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