Existence Poem by Avinash Nair

Existence



When time passes as time does,
Without you noticing it passing by,
A helpless senselessness creeps in you
That becomes impossible to hide.
You act and you react
But tis all in vain,
You cannot hide the fact
The constant pain,
Of life and living
Of strife and surviving.
You smile without any happiness,
You cry but there is no sadness,
Tis all a numbness,
A coldness
Of mere existence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Avinash Nair 08 January 2014

@All thank you for your valued comments

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Rajesh Thankappan 08 January 2014

Yes, sometimes life benumbs us yet we have to look for a silver lining. A good write.

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2013

When we talk about truth, pain and fears can be there because it true..as time walks it does tell what you tell here...an existence of reality_Soul

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Vishal Sharma 09 June 2013

it reminded me a poem by shakespeare indeed a great ant natural write and sparking effect the poem has produced keep it up

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