*exit Doesn'T Exist.... Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

*exit Doesn'T Exist....

Rating: 3.4


looking for the exit?
My friend, dont try...
the passersby will laugh
for they had tried it all

The clutches are too strong
The tale is too long
The ears have to move along
to hear the rhythm of that rugged song.

the mercury is rising
you are all alone
the end is near
the truth and the fear
And comes the death with salted tears..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 30 December 2009

marks 10. the nicest and the richest. happy new year. shan

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Kesav Easwaran 28 December 2009

life is like a casino show...at the exit one is infact made to re-enter...the truth on this darkness has been brightly presented...and that too in beautiful words...10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 27 December 2009

death with salted tears expressed very well...mercury rising and pulse falling...the body dies down

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C. P. Sharma 26 December 2009

Great metaphysical poetry. CP

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 25 December 2009

very deep and engaging write. always enjoyed your work. thank you.

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