gule rukhsar

Rookie (malakand agency / 24.11.1994)

Experience


asked the lil girl
is it what relies on age?
said O you lil doll
it doth depend on age
its not relied on years
and asked again
is it what depends on time?
said O you lil doll
it doth come with time
its not an yearly thing
so asked again
what is it then?
said O my lil sweety
it doth depend on age
its not relied on years
it doth come with time
its not an yearly thing
it depends on the fire
you try to put water on
it relies on the stone
that hinders your way
it comes with the water
that rushes through your sand castle
'you are more experienced
if you strive a moment harder'

Submitted: Saturday, December 08, 2012
Edited: Saturday, December 08, 2012

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written in the age of 17
dated 25.9.2012

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