hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 68,169 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Eyes Very Wide - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Nor intention or satire
Just a wish to be near
Show its worth sans fear

No darkness may threaten
No brightness may be shown
It will be pure and simple
To come over the desire trouble

You agreed to surrender
With one condition to offer
Virginity, in no case, to alter
Till it has found time to cater

I was inclined
Even though slightly suffered
From instability in mind
As she was honest and kind

The wind blew in silently
She closed her eyes gently
As if to think of coming days
When she was eager to give away

What will be difference between love and lust
She wanted to make it sure as it was must
She was to feel it as eternal joy
Nothing should be objected when time approached to enjoy

Time was clicking fast
Hours were going to last
Time was now her side
As she lay on with eyes very wide


Comments about Eyes Very Wide by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 68,169 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2013 3:36:00 AM)

    message matched with the title poem.


    Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi Less than a minute ago
    message well matched with the title poem
    Comment +1
    very good :) (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 68,169 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2013 3:36:00 AM)

    Deanna Woods3 minutes ago
    nice job :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,169 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2013 3:29:00 AM)

    Never it was desire
    Nor intention or satire (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, July 5, 2013


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