hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 19,895 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Eyes Very Wide


Nor intention or satire
Just a wish to be near
Show its worth sans fear

No darkness may threaten
No brightness may be shown
It will be pure and simple
To come over the desire trouble

You agreed to surrender
With one condition to offer
Virginity, in no case, to alter
Till it has found time to cater

I was inclined
Even though slightly suffered
From instability in mind
As she was honest and kind

The wind blew in silently
She closed her eyes gently
As if to think of coming days
When she was eager to give away

What will be difference between love and lust
She wanted to make it sure as it was must
She was to feel it as eternal joy
Nothing should be objected when time approached to enjoy

Time was clicking fast
Hours were going to last
Time was now her side
As she lay on with eyes very wide

Submitted: Friday, July 05, 2013
Edited: Friday, July 05, 2013

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