Fading 28 Poem by Rebecca Stansfield

Fading 28



Tender eyes erase
This there place of emotions
And running through me like a fish to sea
Creating all spells of tingles inside of me
And nature makes these feelings
Feel soft and warm and free and gone
And as essence flies out of my life
And leaves my spirit as cold as ice
Being happy I become so wondrous
As to where I am I'm going
Of life as I know it is behind of me
And I'm falling deeply and madly
Into new life as white as clouds
Where this that so place of emotions
Is untangling all of my life's devotions
The smile leaves my face and goes on past
All of the men whoever had my heart
But stopping at some kind of sluggish street
My empty heart's still incomplete

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 18 July 2011

The last line is the winner

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