Faeries Tell Me Things Poem by moon batchelder

Faeries Tell Me Things

Rating: 5.0


i hear spirits!
dare i say it?
faeries tell me things...
whispering like misty mornings
mysteries and dreams.

tickling my
sensibilities with subtle thoughts.
which list like wisps of eiderdown
on gentle breeze aloft.

they lead me off to
secret places
hidden 'mongst the trees.
where all the Fates
have congregated,
murmuring like honey bees.

chanting and imagining
what destiny shall rise,
like as the moon
and winds conspire
to generate the tides!

i hear voices,
singing odes and
poetry and such.
filling all my days with laughter
wisdom and with lust.

and one day when the moon is new
i'll simply fly away.
become like them
a bit of mist
vanished in the grey.

then i will whisper
into some ear
able to receive
and unto other longing heart
give reason to believe.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 04 August 2009

Such magic here: 'chanting and imagining what destiny shall rise, like as the moon and winds conspire to generate the tides! ' All your verses are of such high quality that I have to choose which one to explain my feelings about the poem- and it's so hard to choose only one, out of so much loveliness.

0 0 Reply
Peter A. Crowther 04 October 2006

Some lovely lines here - whispering like misty mornings - like as the moon/ and winds conspire/ to generate the tides - conspiring to produce a very magical poem.

0 0 Reply
Patricia Gale 03 September 2006

Beutiful! I loved it! The magical word.. such a grand read.

0 0 Reply
Tranquil Ocean 03 September 2006

This is magical poetry at its best.Awesome.... Love...TO

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
moon batchelder

moon batchelder

bemidji, minnesota
Close
Error Success