Failing Star Poem by I Am Rebel

Failing Star

Rating: 5.0


this failing star
Has had it's time
once before it shined so bright
but now, it fades and dies

that failing star
is now a myth
the light that it once produced
has flown away to join another

the failing star
You fall to earth
or so it seems but you will never arrive
you will always be falling through nothingness

My failing star
light up once more
show me life and laughter and love
before you go for good

And i fail, i am my star
And now i shall fall, through nothingness
to nothingness
Because i cannot relight
i am used
too used
and this is the end
for good

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 19 May 2009

This is a dark star, a very stark thoughtful write 10++

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