Fall Poem by janice etienne

Fall

Rating: 4.0


I don't remember why or have a clue
but i think that i might be falling for you
I've fallen so deep that i can't breathe
drowning in your words i fall asleep
And i think of all the things that makes me feel weak
amongst all those things it's you that i see

I see the moon and the sun collide in your eyes
to me it's a wonderful surprise
Take my hand and we'll escape to my fantasy land
where we witness the angels in god's command

But i wanna go under the brilliant blue sea
and watch the mermaids swimming with you and me
Before we leave i would like to take you to heaven
sitting on top of a castle watching the sun go down by seven

With a kiss i wake in your arms
knowing how i traveled so far
so now i can tell something that i can't hide
I've fallen for you and now i know why

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
DELETED NOW 23 April 2008

I like the whole little movie(in my head) of the discription given, especially when u talk about mermaids!

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Emancipation Planz 18 April 2008

You went surfing and found a great wave to ride..... many more falls for you... you are the second young 'un of TENder age that we come right with this one! ! ! ! (Eventually) enjoyed the find and fall.. thanks!

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