Fallin In Place Poem by freda bishop

Fallin In Place

Rating: 5.0


you made me happy
you made me cry
now it is my job to
do whats right
because all you did
was bring me down
you mad me depressed
you made me suprised
you did so much i just dont know
whats right anymore
you want me back i really just cant
i've falling in place all because of you
what should i do i'll never know
but now i'm happy that your gone
i can live my life and stay my way
noone can change me like
you tried to do
so just live your life and i'll live mine
so now your sad you get the pain
just forget about me
and keep your life to yourself
and deal with it because i'm through
so thats all i say
plus how much i hate you for what you did
so be happy and forget i was part of your life
and we will both be happy
thats for sure so thats all for now
peace to you
and i hate you alot
and by the way i'm happy with out you
so peace to you and peace to my life without you
thats all

by: freda.m. bishop
dedication: to the people who were hurt

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lisa Anderson 12 May 2009

oh my god we write the same sort or peoems... i like this one it remings me of mine comment on my i was forced 2 do it... by the way it is a true story.... thanks

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Darius Fields 08 April 2009

nice work, you have serious skills read mine and see if they inspire you

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Barry A. Lanier 08 April 2009

'Fallin In Place' and you are history....................catharsis with a kick

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 07 April 2009

these people who hurt u will make u strong do not worry my friend. great words amazing poem

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